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Ok guys, here’s what i had come up with this weekend. I’ve been meaning to get down to work a lot more than i have had a chance to do so, but ill impart whatever i came up with and we’ll take it from there.

right.

#1:
You’ve all seen this, but ill put it up.

#2:

The little girl. I was messing around with the idea of what the little girl would be like. Im thinking that she should be a pretty big focus of the story so i gave her traits that were sort of unique (i guess?). A little girl but with eyes that display anything but young.

#3:

A partial scene drawing. Here we have another rendition of the main character (i changed the hoodie to a sort of trench coat. Im not sure what would be more preferable, but let’s say for design space, it might not be a bad idea, especially if the character has to carry objects around) and a shot of the little girl. He’s praying for her because he knows she’s about to die (the ambulance is behind, not in the drawing but you can get the gist of things with the flash of light on the page, casting the shadow of the little girl).

Another idea i’ve been messing with is the symbolism involved in stigmata. How would you guys feel about a shot of the little eyes bleeding and her looking up to the sky right before she gets hit by the ambulance??

Let me know your thoughts.

jos